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I love you

这是我英语作业上写的文章,正好是母亲节那天写的
好像还有一些语法的错误,嘿嘿 不过凭我初二的水平也只能这样了……

Today is Mother's Day.I nerver give any gift to her,include today.Because I don't know what I can  buy and what I can do for her.Buy some flower or anti-wrinkle cream?What about helping her to do some housework ?Oh,I'm stupid,I don't know how to express my feelings.
Everyday,she cooks a lot of delicious dishes,and has a lot of work to do.She was so tired that she got a lot of white hairs and more and more wrinkles.I'm afraid that she grows old.I will feel very sad to glimpse at she hasn't teeth and full of white hair.
You give me life,sunshine,happy and so on.You give me a colorful world!I Iove you,mum,you're my hero!If I had my life to live over,I'd like to be your mother and you're my child!I ever took a lot of mistakes,I'm sorry.And I really thanks for your love.
My mum,such an ordinary woman and has profound love.My competition is not good,I must learn more English knowledge to write an outstanding competition.I want to move my mum.Though she can't understand my word.

用不完整的旋律写一首简单的歌

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MS我的沙发,
坐下来慢慢看吧·······

I love you not because of who you are,but because of who I am when I am with you.

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洋文阿,.!

板凳, !

看8懂洋文的,!  飘

ωαлg LeeHom  &  Wu 賴 青 年  巜自 甴﹥>


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do some housework  or  Buy some flower for her . all ok!!

it is good,,,you think about this.your mother will be happy .


                                                                                                                              咳咳 ~   妍之有你 。Kawayi   

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虽然错误有点点。。。

呵呵

但是支持你啦、、、、

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赞!
我高三了都马上,最差的就是英语。LZ你都比我强!

死生契闊,與子誠說。執子之手,與子偕老。
                                    

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虽然偶有些单词看不懂

不过大意上还是明白哒

不过,楼主

你要再好好学学英文

因为有些错地方

学好了就回来改改吧

祝福你跟你妈妈!!

在梅邊的竹林深處等待著Kissgoodbye


~~瘋子49號~~




                                             一听就立刻明白我找到了爱
                                                     即使别人觉得奇怪
                                                       不需要再更改

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